Haven't done a critique in a while, c'mon LET'S GET MY RARITY ON! So the vision, It's quite clear that your goal was to give the viewer a daww attack. You have managed that! You also managed to fill my headcannon with what Colgate looked like when she was younger, don't find a ton of filly ponies and much less background ponies. Originality: as stated before you don't get a lot of gems like this and I'm sure at least one of my tumblr followers will fawn all over this! Technique: Short, sweet and simple! Impact: Very potent but like I say with most works, It's missing that little something that almost falls off the border of over doing it! In this case I think it would be maybe, maybe a big glob of toothpaste to the left splattered on the ground. Just that little something to make it a GRADE A , tell all your friends to look at this because it's super duper amazing drawing. But don't let this discourage you, I know artist don't like it when reviews are someone telling them how awesome their drawing is without giving some legit advice. Hope you enjoyed my run on sentances and keep on drawin' - Spino495
ok first of, this is super cute. her mane looks like the original colgate pony/ minuette. the body outline is like they used on a show. the color of the tooth brush matches her coat. her eyes look adorable, but it would also be cute if you put a little bottle of toothpaste by her hooves. her right eyelash is a little too long, but it makes her look cute too. the view of colgate is a good one, even though they didn't use the style like her face pose on the show. sometime I would just want to hug this picture its so cute!